Friday, 18 September 2015

Pitch feedback


By filming the pitch you are using digital technologies which will give an insight into your creative journey. Your pitch allowed you to talk confidently about progress, plan and the development of ideas. Your project shows great promise and ambition in use of technology. You have researched film-making techniques and show a real passion for learning about this medium which comes through in your pitch.  It was well prepared and the script was provided to your peers.

Influences  are clearly identified and I like the Edgar Wright links, make sure these are shown on the blog.

Upload your own film made as practice and discuss its strengths and weaknesses. Provide me with a copy if possible.

Describe the drafting process of the script and outline what you have learned.

Develop ideas for print products. 

Explain how you are using lighting using images.

You could have read the script with the group to allow them to understand the narrative

Document the work done on back stories and character biographies and all the planning covered. Ensure this goes on to the blog and is fully evidenced.

Very promising hitting aspects of level 4.

Ensure that your cretaive journey is reflected on the web-log.

2 comments:

  1. I will be Uploading our own film to YouTube when it is done and analysing it. I am in the middle of adding the scripting bits up and describing the change from draft 2 to draft 3 and I will add to my blog when draft 3 is finished. I will be doing a lighting post outlining what sort of lights we have and what we will use them for in detail. I will also be working on some ideas for the print products that we have to make as well.

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