'Choice' - First Draft Feedback

My views on the first draft so far; 

• There is some out of focus shots that we are using in the first draft,
• Some of the shots aren't very stable such as the tracking shot,
• The audio in the scenes isn't very good at the minute,
• Need to finish the editing to make sure that the video flows from one shot to another,
• The dialogue audio is good and clear,
• There is props and lights in the background

My questions;

1. How would you rate the quality of the shots?
2. What did you enjoy about the video?
3. What needs improving?
4. Can you see the pieces of the narrative?
5. Were the locations varying enough?
6. how was the acting?
7. From what you have heard, What did you think of the dialogue?
8. Can you see the David Fincher Conventions? Are the Obvious?
9. What part of the editing did you like? Why?
10. What level would you give it and why?