November feedback

You have added character outlines

Production schedule and shooting schedule shows planning and an equipment list shows an understanding of technology and shows ambition in planning.

A list of shots for scene 1 shows attention to detail.

The post on a target audience needs writing. It has been left unfinished which seems to be a theme. This lack of completion needs to be dealt with before submission.

The script is excelllent showing collaboration and planning at level 4. However, you must ensure that you play a full part in all elements of the prodiuction.

Documenting the process is essential and there are gaps at present.  Make an effort to publish all research and planning

Move on to gain audience feedback about your first cut.

Avoid complacency and keep posting regularly.

Document your creative journey and your involvement.

This production shows promise and you should be gaining the higher grades.  It would be a shame if you flatter to deceive.

Stay on task.  I know that you are spending a lot of time editing and we are about to see the results of this. However, don't lose marks for the other parts.